Citizen Goth
Yes it failed, but I still think the storyline is great> everything connects back to each other. Too bad the art sucks.
Here is the original script:
GOTH KID
SCENE1()
Opening shots()
(Overlooking the city we see people throw garbage on the floor and going about their daily business. Cars roar up and down the street. We see a sign saying: WELCOME TO L468f3h#a City, the land of opportunity
We keep tracking across and then into a house where a lazy young kid is slumped down watching TV
We see the show start
The presenter who is a young homosexual man bounces on the screen to audiences cheering him.
Presenter: Hello Boys! (quieter suddenly) and girls TO ALL NEW CELEBRITY SURGERY
(show clips of celebritys operating on a man)
voiceover twenty celebrities take over from twenty doctors with no training whatsoever.
Will they complete the surgery or will they fail miserably
Show a young muscular male celebrity operating on a healthy female
Voice: We got hidden cameras watching there every move
The Celeb leans down and licks her face and then he starts operating
Celebrity Surgery tonight at 9
(cut back to the show)
Presenter: (Pushes his lips together) Looks bloody brilliant,
The kid is sat there frowning
Kid: (lisp) what the ffffffff
Presenter: SO a what did you all have for breakfast! Wait wait wait did I say Break! Oh ha ha I did time for a break Boys!
Kid snarls.
The presenter goes backstage, where his boss (dressed as a pimp)
Shirt tag: TV BIG BOSS
is waiting
Boss: Bitch that was fucking terrible, fucking terrible, terrible fucking
The presenter begins shaking and drops down on all fours
Presnter: I’m still back after the b break aren’t I?
He crawls over to the boss and brushes his nose on his legs
Presenter: oooh
Boss: your ass you will be,
We see the presenter sent flying to the pavement
Boss: right I rang for a replacement bitch, he will be here in bout half an hour
Worker: but sir…
Boss: its in its ad break
Worker: for half an hour
The worker scampers off
The boss wipes his head and removes layers of socks from his pants
We see Frosties kid advert on a continuous loop
Kid: aghhhhhh! He throws his remote smashing the TV
Kid: Bleed!
His mother enters who is a scientist and wearing thick glasses
Mother: sweety I’m being scientific in here, shouldn’t you be at the work.
Kid: yeah
The kid walks out slamming the door
(we pan through the city as we do we see an old pensioner hit by a car:
No one stops and a bunch of people cross the road)
Scene: kids work
The kid is frying burgers and passing them through when his old fat boss comes in
Boss: hay ya doing kiddo
Kid: I’m okay Boss
Boss: thought I’d have a chat to ya, seeing as ya all alone
The kid grits hit teeth
Kid: No I’m really okay Boss
Boss: are you really happy here
The kid puts on a false grin
Kid: yes I’m really really happy
Boss: there I was stood Jim, there on Nigger street with just a condom and the clothes on my back…
The kid throws a steaming hot burger at him it splats on his bald head.
Boss: aghhhhhhhhh!
Kid: I’m sick of you abusing my lonely job position with your perverted imaginative stories it is bloody awful.
Boss: Ultimatum time, its either my sack or the pavement
(the kids blinks and opens his mouth)
We see the kid getting thrown out on to the pavement
He stands up
Kid: bollocks
(pan across the city)
We see a sign stuck out saying “ RED LIGHT DISTRICT 54545252352413” There is a sign under it saying: “PLEASE KEEP THESE PREMISES TIDY”
A bunch of prostitutes and the presenter are stood by the road side
Presenter: I want me old job back…
and a police car is driving past
Prozzie 1: P… Police quick girls lets make ourselves decent
They all put on their KKK masks on
The police car pulls up revealing a big hairy cop
Cop: are any of you men
The presenter raises his arm
Cop: get in the car
(cut to black)
We see the kid again walking down the road quickly he gets to the end of the pavement where a teary eyed woman is stood there
Woman: I’m going to do it, this is the end, I have nothing else to to to live for
The kid grabs her
Kid: Ya not going to kill yourself now
The woman pulls out a knife and stabs herself
Kid: what the…
He pushes her in to the road and storms off
Kid: ohhhhhhhhhhh fucking hel!!!!! Aghhhhhhhh!
The presenter is storming down the same way with a ten pound note,
Presenter: fucking cheap son of a fat smelly dirty ass fucking aids ridden bitch
They bump in to each other.
Kid: watch where ya going piss-head
The presenter gazes over him
Presenter: yeeeeeeeessss my old job is calling. (he turns his head and we see a building in the backdrop)
(cut to black)
We see the kid getting makeup and being reworked with chains and in a studio
The presenter is shaking hands with his old boss
Boss: I’ll tell ya bud, the kids will eat him up and so will the rest, we will be covering him forever fucking brilliant discovery.
(we see him come out of the studio all goth he swings a chain and flies away.
Boss: be back before dark
Gothkid enters his house and runs upstairs
A man with glasses is sat watching TV.
Man: hello son
We see the box
TV: You’re watching Nick JR with Celebrity storytelling!
We see a bunch of kids sat in a reading circle
Presenter: today we have 50 cent telling a story to the children
50 sits down with Red riding hood
Presenter: lets begin
The kids gather around him as he speaks
50: fo shit motherfuckering bitch nigger fo shit nigger nigger fuck ass come over fuck nigger bitch motherfucker
We pan to the kitchen where his mum is experimenting on a monkey
(she is sawing its head off)
Gothkid comes back down with a bag
Gothkid: I’m leaving home mum bye!
Mum whirls around and looks over her son
Mum: you look like a murderer
Goth: yeah I’m taking the whole world head first
Goth kid leaves slamming the door
Mum frowns.
We see Gothkid flying through cities and then forests fighting corrupt governments, Terrorists and an ancient Cyclops.
He is also headlining the papers and the TV presented by the presenter
We see three robots watching from cliffs.
They jump down and imprison Gothkid and throw him through a time warp in to a laboratory
Goth: who who are you, FBI, CIA?
Voice: No
Goth kids mum walks down,
Goth: mum!
Mum: there was no other way I could stop you, now that you’re all big! I had to build, create to save my most beloved creation
Mum walks closer to Goth
Main Robot: Creation, we are, we are the least beloved creation
Second robot: we want, we want freedom, free we are self aware.
Mum: oh dear… in order for them to catch a non comformist I made them a little similar
Third robot: Opressor must be mudered
First robot fires his bullet at Mum killing her
Gothkid: Muuuuuuuuuuuuummm!
They fly away and Goth kid breaks free and holds his mothers dieing body
Goth: m mum!
(fade to black)
Goth kid enters a shop
(metal music)
He buys chainsaws and every other power tool
He strolls into the city where he sees the robots up on top of a high building
Robot 1: All human life must be
Robot 2: eradicated
Goth kid flips his chain and flies up there beside them
Robot 3: It’s the Gothkid
Goth kid throws his chainsaw straight into Robot 3 and jumps in the air
The robots jump up and duel in the sky. Goth Kid throws a punch at Robot 1 denting him
Robot 1 slaps Goth to the building roof.
The two robots then start kicking him in like thugs.
Goth snaps two and knocks them both down he then swings his chain in the air and disappears in to the sky.
The two remaining robots get up and look up as Goth comes flying down with a chain.
(cut to black)
